Micro fiction: Killer Bees by Paula Johnson

Trevor planned to kill himself on his sixteenth birthday. Mom always said that his condition restricted him to raw, organic produce, so…no cake. His heart murmur precluded driving, Homeschooling was for his own protection. College was off the table.

His suicide would be dramatic, his weapon ordinary. He strolled to Arlington Garden and found bushes buzzing with bees. He plunged in, flailing and swatting his way into certain anaphylaxis.

Trevor reclined on a concrete bench and waited for the end. And waited. Two hours later, he arrived home with a dozen bee stings, a dozen donuts and a new plan.

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16 Responses to Micro fiction: Killer Bees by Paula Johnson

  1. Thanks for your comments. I like how there are two intrepretations. Some think he’ll kill himself with the food. My thought is that he realized his mother lied about EVERYTHING, so he would enjoy some wheat-based treats and map out a new plan for his life.

  2. But what if his mom was lying about everything except the special diet need and Trevor keels over from the donuts. I guess he’d die a happy man.

  3. What I like in these very short stories is that they force the reader into imaging the full story. What they have before them is hints; clues. To know the story you have to fill in the blanks. The reader is forced to actively participate in the story.

    In this case, it makes no sense unless you think about the few short lines you’re given. Donuts? You have to have been paying attention to the first paragraph. Suicide? It only makes sense if you’ve paid attention to the first words, the opening.

    Wonderful story. Though it does leave me wondering what that new plan is.

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